Correct Errors in the Given Paragraph No. 2

Correction of Mistakes

Q. Correct the following errors in all. Then rewrite the paragraph as you have revised it. (errors in the use of verb, noun number, preposition, incorrect spelling, missing article, missing infinitive, missing adjective.)

Paragraph

We should not value the gold so much as wisdom. We can get lot of wealth and property suddenly, but they are of no benefit for us if we do not put them to a proper use. We can start living to a luxury without winning the sympathy and love of others. Friends will start disappearing fastly, and time will come when people will begin to avoid us.

Errors Indicated in the above Paragraph

We should not value the gold so much as wisdom. We can get lot of wealth and property suddenly, but they are of no benefit for us if we do not put them to a proper use. We can start living to a luxury without winning the sympathy and love of others. Friends will start disappearing fastly, and time will come when people will begin to avoid us.

Correction Made in the Given Para
We should not value gold so much as wisdom. We can get lots of wealth and property suddenly, but they are of no benefit to us if we do not put them to a proper use. We can start living to luxury without winning the sympathy and love of others. Friends will start disappearing fast, and a time will come when people will begin to avoid us.